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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6319
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

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, promoting the equal development of family members. Some local laws make clear regulations on female employees’ maternity leave, male workers’ nursing leave and allowances. They support the balance of work and family between men and women. Couples should jointly bear family responsibility. Exploring the development of social work to women and family, the regulations also improve women’s social support system. They carry out “The movement of caring for girl” and change the culture and customs of traditional boys’ preferences. Social pension service system was established and improved, so the living conditions and qualities of the elderly women have been improved. Poor, widowed and elderly women get special care. The local laws actively develop family cultural construction activities of “Five civilized family” and “Looking for the most beautiful family” and advocate civilized family atmosphere. For 20 years, the gender equality in the marriage and family has improved obviously. In the latest survey of Chinese women’s social status, it is shown that it is a trend to jointly make household affairs of the couples. More than 7% of the women involved in the family of major decisions. More and more women are able to share family resources equally, and the concept of sharing housework is more accepted. The housework time gap between the two sexes is shortened from 150 minutes in the former decade to 74 minutes.

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