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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6311
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题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

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Some local laws and regulations have definitely stipulated maternity leave of female staff and nursing leave and subsidy of male staff, approving that male and female should strike a balance between work and family and couples should shoulder the responsibility of family together.Exploring and developing social work of women and marriage can improve the system of women social approval.Besides, “care for girls” movement has been carried out, which has changed some cultural conventions of traditional boys.In addition, we will accelerate the establishment of a sound social service system for the elderly, through which women’s living conditions and quality have been promoted and women poor, widowed and solitary have gained special care.Furthermore, family culture construction activities like “five-virtue family” and “search for the most beautiful family ”should be carried out actively in order to advocate civilized family traditions.For the past 20 years, the condition of sexual equity has changed obviously. The new research about women’s social status shows that couple make-decision together becomes a trend and 70%women involved in make-decision. More and more women can share family resources on an equal basis. Many people are accepted the attitude of diving housework between men and women. The distance of sexual homework time reduces to 74 minute from 150 minute in 10 years ago.

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