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Some local laws and regulations have definitely stipulated maternity leave of female staff and nursing leave and subsidy of male staff, approving that male and female should strike a balance between work and family and couples should shoulder the responsibility of family together.Exploring and developing social work of women and marriage can improve the system of women social approval.Besides, “care for girls” movement has been carried out, which has changed some cultural conventions of traditional boys.In addition, we will accelerate the establishment of a sound social service system for the elderly, through which women’s living conditions and quality have been promoted and women poor, widowed and solitary have gained special care.Furthermore, family culture construction activities like “five-virtue family” and “search for the most beautiful family ”should be carried out actively in order to advocate civilized family traditions.