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字数：300 满分：100分
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For me ,always tight my belt ,because i could not make much money ,i am a poor girl .i work long but get less .Every girl like to go shopping ,me either .verybody know ,go shopping will spend money ,no matter we buy nice clothes ,food ,bags or something accessories. I ccount my money very carefully every time when i spend money ,and i don't go outside with friends ,people around me often go to see the films ,or go to ktv,but i never be one of their team .because i am poor ,i need to save money ,not spend money . Maybe when i find a good job then i can make more money ,but now ,not the right time to spend money,i have found why i still poor ,becauses i lack of capability to make money ,so i think i have to learn more and improve myself .this is the most important thing for me now .i don't want to live a life like this ,i believe one day ,i will never ccount when spend money .
