2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Today,more and more families have computers at home.And a large number of people can use computer to play,study or work.We can say computer changes our lives. For example,We can go shopping at computer and buy everything at Internet such as food.We can do everything at home with computer,don't go outside.But is it a good life?No!If we play computer every day ,you will find our lives become so quite.No time to play with our family. No time to make many friends.No time to go traveling. As a student,if I play computer every day. I have no time to study.My eye will be bad.So computer can change our lives.But computer cann't give man a good life.