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字数:300 满分:100分
文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
How to use our money? Nowadays, all of us students have our own money. But most of the money are given by our parents.So how to use our money in a proper way is a serious problem.I think,as students,we should save our money and use money rationally. When I came to my college, I found I have a lot of things to buy.So I found part-time jobs in many ways.I passed out the leaflets at the end and I earned 15yuan per hours.It spent my a large amount of time in doing that job but I nearly earn money.So I decided to save money in order to buy what I want.