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文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
How to use our money? Nowadays, all of us students have our own money. But most of the money are given by our parents. So how to use our money in a proper way is a serious problem. I think, as students, we should save our money and use money rationally. When I came to my college, I found I have a lot of things to buy. So I found part-time jobs in many ways. At the end, I passed out the leaflets I earned 15yuan per hours. It spent my a large amount of time in doing that job but I nearly earn money. So I decided to save money in order to buy what I want.
