文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
We have a new teacher today. She is a beautiful middle-aged woman, she teach us English. She has an oval face with two large brown eyes, and a fair complexion glows with a hint of pink. She has long golden hair drooped down on her shoulders. She was in a red coat, and wore black pants, with two black high-heeled shoes. She looks very kindly, I think she must be very easy to get along with, we all like her very much.