句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
We have a new teacher today. She is a beautiful middle-aged woman, she teaches us English. She has an oval face with two large brown eyes, and a fair complexion glows with a hint of pink. She has beautiful long golden hair. She was in a red coat, and wore black pants, with two black high-heeled shoes. She looks very kindly, I believe she must be very easy to get along with, we all like her very much.