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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Save money We are students, have the limit ability of econmic. When shopping, we must think twice.So most of us like collect coupons, group-buy deals and like buy on sale clothes.Sometimes We have spent money for it,but it is not what we want . So I think we must be a smart consumer.