2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Hi! my friends how are doing recently? I glad to get touch with. I hear you will come to china and the place where you will come to place is my hometown. so I feel very happy in order to invest you to visit my hometown. there is much interst of places. though you will come here in summer. I can bring you a lake where has much dark birds and is very clean. we can both take a boat and see much view in surrounding. I think you must be attract the wonderful view. The view likes a picture if you come my hometown you can feel better than before you come here. thus I hope you come to myhometown that you have a sence of happiness. welocme tou you warmly. Good wishes for you !