2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computers now are using widely. People can search information ,buy something ,and chat on the Internet . Computers make our life convenient . But ,is this always good ? Different people have different opinions. Some people believe that computer likes their organs ,they can't live without it .However ,some people think ,computer makes adolescent adict it and begin hating learning . As far as i am concerned ,each coin has its other side .Computers play a important role in our daily life ,but we should use them correctly .We can't rely too much on a computer .We can't let a computer steal our normal life .We can take good advantage of computers and solve problems which are difficult . Computers are bad to our eyes ,if we use them for a long time .We should control ourself and make a time plan ,try our best to use them .