2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Hi!My friends how are doing recently? I glad to get in touch with. I hear you will come to china and the place where you will come to place is my hometown. So I feel very happy in order to invest you to visit my hometown. there is much interest of places. though you will come here in the summer. I can bring you a lake where has many dark birds and is very clean. we can both take a boat and see much view in surrounding. I think you must be attracted because of the wonderful view. The view likes a picture if you come to my hometown, you can feel better than before you come here. thus I hope you come to myhometown that you have a sence of happiness. Welcome to you warmly. Good wishes for you !