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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2680
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, there is one argument regarding getting news from newspapers or TV is a waste of time, I totally disagree with it. On the one hand, person is not the single on in this world, and now our society are becoming more and more integrated, one cannot get econimical and psychological support just depending himself, that means he or she must ge in touch with outside, one very usefull connection tool is newspapare and TV and so on, from which we can get the latest happening and news, and some information containing in it can give you chance or opportunity to develop yourself well. On the other hand, reading newspapers and watching TV will make comparatively boring life more meaningful, which can give you some topics to discuss with other people. To conclude, getting news from public tools definitely make some sense to us. We should make the most of it.

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