文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There is too much misunderstanding in our life. The majority of these misunderstanding results from hasty conclusion.A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or mistake conclusion.When we see or hear something for the first time,we don't know it well and we can't analys it without enough information.Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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