文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There is too much misunderstanding in our life. The majority of these misunderstanding results from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or mistake conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analys it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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