文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,不过单词拼写方面要继续努力。
It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There is too much misunderstanding in our life. The majority of these misunderstanding results from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or eroor conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analys it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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