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It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There is too much misunderstanding in our life. The majority of these misunderstanding results from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or error conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analys it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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