作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There are too many misunderstandings in our life. The majority of these misunderstandings comes from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or incorrect conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analyze it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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