作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
We are all living in an age when people have a rapid pace of life which causes we have no enough time to consider the fact being misunderstood. As inexperinced students, we may come out a It's not sensible to get a conclusion when you see or hear something happening. There are too many misunderstandings in our life. The majority of these misunderstandings comes from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or incorrect conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analyze it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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