拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
We are all living in an age when people have a rapid pace of life which causes we have no enough time to repeatedly consider the fact that easily being misunderstood. As inexperienced students, we can't catch the real fact definitely for some times. So that it's not sensible to get a conclusion when we see or hear something happening. Otherwise we may easily make a mistake. There are too many misunderstandings in our life. The majority of these misunderstandings comes from hasty conclusion. A hasty conclusion always means a horrible or incorrect conclusion. When we see or hear something for the first time, we don't know it well and we can't analyze it without enough information. Thereby we shouldn't give out a conclusion at once.
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