小学三年级英语作文:My school

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富。

My school is CuiYuan middle school,My school is near my house ,so I always go by food. Many activities take place in my school,such as raise money for the disabled,go to old people's home to do voluntary work,use bodylanguage to communicate with others and so on. This is my school.How wonderful