小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

My friend is very kind ,she is not bueatiful but very cute ,she is helpful,l like her,l feel good when l stay with her ,she always wark hard,and when i suday with her,she'll help me with someting i don't understand.she is my best friend.I think you wll also like her,don't you ?