小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误。

My friend is very kind ,she is not beautiful but very cute . She is helpful,l like her,l feel good when l stay with her ,She always works hard,and when i study with her,She'll help me with something i don't understand.she is my best friend.I believe you'll also like her,don't you ?