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Dear John Driscoll: I am the Sales department manager in Fox Electronic Comply,we want to go on a meeting at 20th,JUNE as to the launch date of the new product and the advertising compaign.Pls let me know if you have any inconversience as soon as possible. Hope we can build the long contact relationship. Best regards ! Tom Smith 10th,JUNE