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There are always some people who have a quick reaction to what they have seen or heard right now and draw to a hasty conclusion afterwards. However, people are living in a much more complex society than they thought and they need to think over to arrive at a convincing conclusion. Personally, it is unwise to draw to a conclusion no sooner than it happened in the last minute. For the first place, what you have seen or heard may mislead you to arrive at the wrong conclusion. Confusius is the distinguished philosopher in ancient China. His remarkable philosophical opinion had attracted more than 3,000 followers. One day, when he passed by the kitchen. He came across one of his upright student-Yan Hui, who tasted the porridge secretly. He frowned and went away, regarding Yan Hui as a dishonest person. Beyond all his expectaions, after some hours, the Confusius finally knew the truth that while Yan Hui was cooking in the kitchen, one of the meat spilt out and he was unwilling to throw it out so picked it up and ate it by himself. Confusius was touched deeply and signed that what he had seen by his own eyes should deceive him. Confusius can be cheated by his own eyes, not to mention us normal people. For the second place, draw to the hasty conclusion may lead to a defective conclusion. As the Chinese old saying goes "Think twice makes things perfect". It takes us much time to have a comprehensive thinking. As every doctor have to think twice before they give the proper prescription to the patients in order to release their pain and every just judge must think over before they sentence the guilty to death, the normal people have to think well so that we can draw to a wisdom and regretless decision. Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that it is unwise for us to draw to a hasty conclusion. We had better think twice and make things perfect.
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