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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2054
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。

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To highlight the public policy problem in traffic that has been known to contribute to increasing congestion in LA, it is imperative to first examine the extent of government investment in the area. Knill and Tosun (2012: 47-48) notes that advocating for public policies that focus on improvement in the control and timing of traffic signals has the potential of significantly reducing traffic delays at the arterial intersections in most cities that are prone to traffic congestion. While the city of LA has previously invested in the approach, less resource involvement has often resulted in much less efficient and outdated control and timing mechanisms that contribute to the foreseeable arterial network congestion. Besides, the monitoring and signal timing in LA has often caused bottlenecks in the city boundaries. Therefore, public policies that concentrate on an upgrade in the monitoring and timing technology can help improve inter-jurisdictional coordination and delays besides creating an opportunity for implementing signal prioritisation to enable faster bus service (Kane and Bishop, 2002:27).

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