采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
To highlight the public policy problem in traffic that has been known to contribute to increasing congestion in LA, it is imperative to first examine the extent of government investment in the area. Knill and Tosun (2012: 47-48) notes that advocating for public policies that focus on improvement in the control and timing of traffic signals has the potential of significantly reducing traffic delays at the arterial intersections in most cities that are prone to traffic congestion. While the city of LA has previously invested in the approach, less resource involvement has often resulted in much less efficient and outdated control and timing mechanisms that contribute to the foreseeable arterial network congestion. Besides, the monitoring and signal timing in LA has often caused bottlenecks in the city boundaries. Therefore, public policies that concentrate on an upgrade in the monitoring and timing technology can help improve inter-jurisdictional coordination and delays besides creating an opportunity for implementing signal prioritisation to enable faster bus service (Kane and Bishop, 2002:27).