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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2026
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

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Further, there may be concerns from the neighbouring communities on the number of vehicles that will be required to park on the streets within their surrounding residential. Therefore, the policy should be applied systematically beginning with broad boulevards in LA to thwart the perceptions that some neighbourhoods or businesses are targeted for unfair treatments. Another possibility to overcome opposition is to install the parking metres within the surrounding residential communities (Knill and Tosun, 2012: 47-48). Those above should target visitors as long as the revenues accrued are allocated to benefit the residents through public improvement initiatives, for instance, creating pocket parks, burying utility lines and repairing sidewalks.The above idea of taxing visitors for parking on residential streets has the potential of creating enthusiasm within the surrounding neighbourhoods hence creating a win-win situation. However, the implementation of the policy requires two steps. The initial step is an identification of the congested and main arterial thoroughfares. Specifically, those situations are all allowing to curb parking during the peak hours are obviously in LA.Similarly, an evaluation should be done on the corridors that are associated with primary bus services in LA to enable the creation of bus-only lanes. Secondly, there should be a systematic implementation of curb parking restrictions to facilitate the creation of bus-only lanes in merited spaces.

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