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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2054
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者在句法层面做的很棒;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

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Additionally, it is important for the county policy actors to advocate for policies that will ensure paired one-way street network in the high-volume corridors. The public policy will help in increasing road capacity since there will be no need for the median strip (Kane and Bishop, 2002:27). In any case, it can turn into a travel lane. Additionally, the initiative has the potential of reducing traffic delays by allowing progressive timing in signals in the travel direction hence making it faster and easier in negotiating left turns. Besides, the construction of bicycle lanes and bus-only lanes on the one-way streets systems is necessary. However, the possible obstacle for the initiative is that local businesses may recommend two-way streets that have slow moving traffic to enable them to attract potential customers. Similarly, the owners of the surrounding residential may worry of increased cut-through traffics specifically, when the vehicles intend to backtrack. Consequently, they may worry about the high travel speeds that have the potential of diminishing their pedestrian environment by introducing safety risks. Nonetheless, public participation should be conducted and explanation given as to why the benefits of the initiative far outweigh the potential drawbacks.

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