小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend ,she is a beautiful gril, she is a sunshine gril , we are often shoop . she is a good-looking gril. she like swimming.she have a black eys and red mosth. she have a long black hair. I very like she, Beause,she is very nice.she have a voice.I think and she say,"I love you"