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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2054
要求:
根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
提示:
1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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In examining the second part of the essay, it is imperative to begin by exploring the traffic congestion situation in LA to get an understanding into the background and causes of the problem. The region of Los Angeles (LA) has the highest congestion of traffic in the US (Chung and Recker, 2012: 38). Most of the underlying causes of the congestion include population growth, rising economy and the trading of goods along the Long Beach and the Los Angeles Ports. The above projects an increasing trend of projection as long as no significant policy is implemented to control the congestion. Moreover, too much traffic congestion is distractive from realising quality life among residents of LA. That is, it is environmentally damaging, economically wasteful and exacerbates the concerns of social justice (Dilger, 2003: 24).Therefore, finding an equitable and efficient mitigation strategy for easing the traffic congestion will solve most of the social concerns. The primary intention of this paper is to establish and recommend the possible strategies for controlling traffic congestion in LA County. The paper elements, also, examine literature that explores data characterising the traffic congestion in LA, key contributors to the congestion, and identify the variety of implementable congestion-reduction strategies. Besides, it explores the possible challenges and considers complementary strategies that will help in building political consensus in the policy implementation.

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