文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
Traffic congestion accentuates from the imbalance between the demand and supply of road space. However, a substantial expansion of available road networks in LA may not happen for several reasons. For example, due to resistance and minimal fiscal capacity among the affected communities will be limited(Althaus et al., 2007: 19). Besides, the present economic run-up and downturn in the prices of fuel, the forecasted population growth, and movement of goods all project that truck and automobile travel will increasingly expand in the future. On the other hand, as long as there is a nonlinear relationship between travel speed and traffic volume in LA, even the minimal rises in peak-hour driving results in worse traffic congestion. Moreover, LA has already owing a dense network of roads that operates at high-frequency level (Qiu, Li and Haghani, 2014: 41).Therefore, significant opportunities for expanding or enhancing the road network efficiency is unlikely. Consequently, most LA residents drive a lot when compared to their regional population density (Leonard, II and Rodegerdts, 1998: 37). Therefore finding avenues for managing the driving demand especially during peak hours can be the most promising way of reducing traffic congestion.