2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Emerging from this picture is an alarming scene that two young folks, with many snacks, is canoeing in the stream for fun. They toss rubbish in any place where have bring happiness for them. Evidently, they have lost the sense of environmental protection. It is deeply rooted in the mind of generally public that no other eras play more emphasize on the environmental protection than today. But this view is still applicably? I don’t reckon so. Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. Firstly, it is not surprise to see some folks hunting wild-animals for fun, cooking them for food, selling them for profit. In addition, it is not rare to notice that some human beings cutting trees for money, farmland, or firewood. What the hell happened to us?Traditionally, they loss the sense of environmental protection is considered. The real reason, in fact, may be just be diverse: Aren’t the sense of environmental protection swallowed by their greediness? Given all this . To serve as responsible stewards of the planet. I hold the view that we need legislation from department concerned, intervention from environment groups, and supervision from the mass media. Apart from we also need the awareness that we would be homeless if we mistreat our planet earth----the only home of us.