文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。
The suggested strategies for controlling traffic congestion highlight various critical issues that are likely to spike protests from the political sphere in LA. For instance, the pricing programs may not realise which effective if the major stakeholders is not involved and educated. This is because while some quarters will consider themselves as exploited under the systems, some may oppose the strategies from the matters of political principle. Thus, the implementation and planning of the strategies must be undertaken as an exercise that is built under political consensus (Hill, 2014: 22). In turn, the above will call for initiatives for mitigating equity concerns that are perceived or real and those relating to road pricing. For the above reasons, it is also important to have the complementary set of strategies that will assist in reducing congestion and mitigating concerns of equity, for instance, those that distribute benefits and costs broadly to the transport stakeholders. However, the failure or success of the policy strategies lies in the aspects of policy analysis, detailed engineering, and more son in the political goodwill. As such, mobilising the support from both the ruling collation and the opposition in both spheres of the county and the federal government is prudent. Evidently, the political challenges in LA are more compounded because of the complex decision-making environments in which cooperation must be sought among multiple agencies.