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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6638
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题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Emerging from this picture is an alarming scene that two tourists, with many snacks, is eating happily on a boat and tossing rubbish into the lake which is full of waste. Evidently, they have lost the sense of environmental protection. It is deeply rooted in the mind of generally public that no other eras play more emphasize on the environmental protection than today. But this view is still applicably? I don’t reckon so. Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. Firstly, it is not surprise to see some folks hunting wild-animals for fun, cooking them for food, selling them for profit. In addition, it is not rare to notice that some human beings cutting trees for money, farmland, or firewood. What the hell happened to us?Traditionally, they loss the sense of environmental protection is considered. The real reason, in fact, may be just be diverse: Aren’t the sense of environmental protection swallowed by their greediness? Given all this . To serve as responsible stewards of the planet. I hold the view that we need legislation from department concerned, intervention from environment groups, and supervision from the mass media. Apart from we also need the awareness that we would be homeless if we mistreat our planet earth----the only home of us.

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