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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2001
要求:
根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
提示:
1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
用户的作文(系统评分91.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。

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Further, local owners of businesses constitute an entity that can oppose restrictions on curbside parking strategy, particularly, within the areas that have scared off-street parking (Marletto and Mameli, 2012: 20). Additionally, private developers may object the policies when the lack of curbside spaces implies the need of providing costly and additional off-street parking. Moreover, nearby residents in LA can worry about the drivers that look for parking spaces that spill in their neighbourhoods. Finally, the drivers themselves may oppose the curb lane idea especially when it is dedicated to the transit use when there are restrictions in the parking spaces. However, most of the foreseeable concerns can be solved collaboratively and through complementary strategies. Consequently, it is important to connect the traffic congestion problems and policy strategies to the themes and theories discussed in the course. To begin with, understanding the contributions of actors in implementing public policies come into play. The actor-cantered approach in public policy analysis that is universally accepted argues that neither the LA systems nor structures can produce effective public policy actions (Weible et al., 2011:42). However, the approach asserts that federal action results from empirically identifiable collection of legal or natural persons in the private or public sector in the United States who have shared views, variable values, institutional affiliations, and interests in implementing a government policy designed for a known societal problem. Therefore, the actors produce all of the six outcomes of public policies that include the causal model for defining the traffic congestion in LA, a political-administrative programme, actions, plans, a political-administrative arrangement, evaluative statements, and the policy outputs. Moreover, Waller (1992:39) notes that, rather than starting with bilateral exchanges, between societal and political-administrative factors it is better to engage several political-administrative actors in different ministries in defending divergent interests that concern the policy initiatives.

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