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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2060
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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According to various socialists and philosophers, law is also considered to be an ideological factor that more likely to shape societies’ beliefs. Law is regarded as a social construction mechanism that is more likely to shape attitude of the societies that regulates behaviour of the community members with devising set of legal norms for individuals living within a particular society. The regulatory policies as well as strict legal provisions bind individuals within a society. In this context, law inevitably redirects prevailing moral standards of the society as both historys as well as culture of societies are seemingly contributed towards developing the legal system in order to promote equality, minimising undesirable social incidents as well as unlawful activities in the societies that can cause harm in a significant extent. In this regard, few key mechanisms of law have been discussed in the following chapter that has major influence on shaping moral, attitude and belief of people (Walker

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