作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨;连词使用偏少。
To:All the students in School of Economics From:The students'Union of the school Date:September 21,2014 Subject:A Seminar on Wasteful Habits on Campus A seminar on Wasteful Habits on campus is expected to be held on Friday afternoon at 3 o'clock in Student Hall,conducted by the Students'Union of Economics School. As we have read from the reports,waste in our university is serious.To stop this bad habit and conserve our limited resources,we call on all the students to take part in the discussion,airing your views your views and contributing your suggestions to this move.We believe that saving is a kind of virtue requiring support from us all. All students are encouraged to participate.Thanks for your coming.