作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨;可以适当增加副词的使用;连词使用偏少。
To:All the students in School of Economics From:The students'Union of the school Date:September 21,2014 Subject:A Seminar on Wasteful Habits on Campus A seminar on Wasteful Habits on campus is expected to be held on Friday afternoon at 3 o'clock in Student Hall which has a very big conference room,conducted by the Students'Union of Economics School. As we have read from the reports,waste in our university is serious.To stop this bad habit and conserve our limited resources,we call on all the students to take part in the discussion,airing your views your views and contributing your suggestions to this move.We believe that saving is a kind of virtue requiring support from us all. All students are encouraged to participate.Thanks for your coming.