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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3564
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
要求
1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;可以适当增加副词的使用;连词使用偏少。

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To:All the students in School of Economics From:The students'Union of the school Date:September 21,2014 Subject:A Seminar on Wasteful Habits on Campus A seminar on Wasteful Habits on campus is expected to be held on Friday afternoon at 3 o'clock in Student Hall which has a very big conference room,conducted by the Students'Union of Economics School. As we have read from the reports that was published on the China Daily,waste in our university is serious.To stop this bad habit and conserve our limited resources,we call on all the students to take part in the discussion,airing your views your views and contributing your suggestions to this move.We believe that saving is a kind of virtue requiring support from us all. All students are encouraged to participate.Thanks for your coming.

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