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The law is the society is changing for the better development of cognition and for determining a better position for people to live. The mindset of people is changing and the society is taking position towards the negative impact that sexual and other social evils have. Contextually, it is important to note that law is taking measures to shape the moral attitude of people by protecting the values (Bilz