文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;文章用词太过单一,请作者增加词汇丰富度;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
The law in the society is changing for the better development of cognition and for determining a better position for people to live. The mindset of people is changing and the society is taking position towards the negative impact that sexual and other social evils have. Contextually, it is important to note that law is taking measures to shape the moral attitude of people by protecting the values (Bilz