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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2061
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;文章组织结构良好。

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Discrimination in the society is one of the led back that negatively affects the society. The major problem that is faced by the society is discrimination that requires anti discrimination legislation impacting people, society and moral value. Contextually, it is important to note that discrimination is an act that tends to isolate people for the wrong doings. It is act of injustices that is followed by the society in order isolate individuals of a group. In this context, it is important to note that the anti discrimination laws are implemented in the society in order to influence the behaviour of people and cognition. The views of people are stereotyped and the legal actions are considered for engaging moral obligations in order to change behaviour of people. Discrimination within a society is of various forms it is against a group or amid gender (Farber

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