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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2001
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
提示:
1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

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For the well being of the society and for the law to be effective it is vital that gender equality is maintained. It is stated that law should not discriminate people on the basis of gender and race because equality is the right of every individual. Education and job in the society should be based upon merit and not on gender. Liberalism in the society is attained through the help of legal regulation. However, it noted that liberalism leads to equality but on the basis of merit because income of people and gender might differ on the basis of talents. Law in a society is implemented to ensure that every activity is performed accordingly to protect harassment and discrimination. Various affirmative actions have been taken by the government in order to maintain law and order and guide behaviour and attitude. In the year 2004, the Age discrimination act was implemented in Australia so that equal opportunity is provided. As per the legal scenario it is of significance to appoint people on the basis of talents when the education and other forms of benefits are equal to individuals (Australian Human Rights Commission, 2016). Law is implemented so that behaviour of people is neutral and positive with ideology of law. The structure of the society is effective and dominant when legal regulation is met and the ideologies are followed by people (Tyler, 1994). Moreover, the anti discrimination acts are subject to innovation and domination in order to avoid offensive issues. The decision making process in the society is inclined towards legal regulations and obligations. It is ascertained that society is effective and has value when people are free to make their decisions without any social evils such as discrimination. Law in the society influences the perception of people because they are aware of the doing and the judgmental factors. The values of people are guided by the legal framework of the society because judgment and social conditioning are dependent upon several factors (Kahan, 1997).

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