Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
Onersuing the Mobile Phone is Evil The picture above is a vivid description of a phonomenon that nowadays the increasing number people are overusing their mobile phones. Although mobile phones can improve people's life, I do not that mobile phones can replace everything. The mobile phone can be tracked back to 20 years ago even more before when most people and students are rare using it. Students can take more time on studying or enjoying club activity, so I have a deep imppression for my university life. But now with an opinion survey found that the growth number people of owning phones are reached to 1billion. Although he mobile phone is changing our life, overusing it also can bring some troubles. From the picture we can see that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks instead of eyes to see. What an iron description is the picture. The fact is that it is happened in real our life. There are some of reports released that people were died result in suing their phones when they were crossing the streets or driving. To sum up, the mobile phone has gteatly influenced people's life, but it can never replace everything.
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