Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错。
Oversuing the mobile Phone is Evil The picture above is a vivid description of a phenomenon that nowadays the increasing number of people are overusing their mobile phones. Although mobile phones can improve people's life, I do not think that mobile phones can replace everything. The mobile phone can be tracked back to 20 years ago even more before when most people and students are rare using it. Students can take more time on studying or enjoying club activity, so I have a deep impression for my university life. But now with an opinion survey found that the growth number people of owning phones are reached to 1billion. Although he mobile phone is changing our life, overusing it can also bring some troubles. From the picture we can see that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks instead of eyes to see. What an ironic description the picture is . The fact is that it happened in our real life. There are some of reports released that people died result in suing their phones when they were crossing the streets or driving. To sum up, the mobile phone has greatly influenced people's life, but it can never replace everything.
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