拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加几条从句;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;可以适当增加副词的使用。
To:Professor Yan Yufei From:Zhang Wei Date:January 15,2014 Subject:First progress report on graduation paper This is the first of the two progress reports that you asked me to submit about my graduation paper. Last week,I gathered some relevant information from our school library and an interview.Of the twelve references listed,I have found nine in our library,and for the others I will go to search in a large library.As for the interview,I had an extended discussion with the Professor Su Qin,an expert from Peking University,who was kind enough to give me some academic brochures on electronics.I hope these materials will be useful for my paper. Starting tomorrow,I will initiate organizing my research paper.And I can be expected to submit a rough draft by the end of this month.