过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
The phenomenon that someone make a conclusion as soon as he listen or see is very common in our life,which I think is unwise.Because what we see or listen is not simple as we usually consider. To begin with,sight confronting us may confuse us,so we can not judge but to believe what we see or listen,which may lead to a mistake.To avoid the situation,we must insist on thinking in person not accepting directly other's opinion.Next,we may mislead others when we tell them conclusion just based on what I see or listen,causing the misunderstanding spread aroud and resulting in more big rumor.Finally,if we often easily trust what we see or hear and not think over it,we will lose ability of judgment. From the statement mentioned above,we can conclude that we should think over and over as we see or listen something,and make judgment,which can help us get closer to truth not misunderstanding.
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