过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法基础较为扎实。
The phenomenon that someone draws a conclusion as soon as he listens or sees is very common in our life, which I think is unwise. Because what we see or listen is not as simple as we usually believe. To begin with, sight confronting us may confuse us, so we can not judge but to believe what we see or listen, which may lead to a mistake. To avoid the situation, we must insist on thinking in person not accepting directly other's opinion. Next,we may mislead others when we tell them conclusion just based on what I see or listen, causing the misunderstanding spread around and resulting in more bigger rumor. Finally, if we often easily trust what we see or hear and not think over it, we will lose ability of a judgment. From the statement mentioned above, we can deduce that we should think over and over as we see or listen something, and draw a judgment, which can help us get closer to truth not misunderstanding.
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