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There are many gorgeous cities in china but my hometown is the unique place i want my friends to visit first in my mind.i was born at a poor and beautiful village of a small city in china.If my foreign friend come here ,the first ,i will take him or her to taste local delicious food at home; one of famous battles in chinese history had been happened here, and now the remains of the ancient battles has been protected and has been a resort for people to visit .the second thing is that i would like to be a leader and show them the great museum and tell them what happend at this battleground.at last ,my hometown is adjoin the Yangtze Revier,so i think rent a boat and head them to enjoy the wonderful sight of it will be great idea.
